Painting by - Ayushi Jain |
मासूम सी ये उँगलियाँ ,
और ये नन्ही सी मुस्कान ...
पलकों पे सजाए रखा है ,
सपनो का ये जहाँ ...
कुछ नटखट सी अदाएँ ,
तो कुछ शरारत भरी आँखें ...
हर गलती को छुपाती है ,
इसके मन की ये सब बातें ...
रुई की गरम रज़ाई में ,
तो कभी माँ के आँचल में ....
लोरी सुनके जो सोता है ,
ये अपने छोटे से महल में ....
न कभी थकता है ,
न कभी रुकता है ...
डांटों तो आंसू बहाता है ,
मेरे लाल तू मुझे बहुत सताता है ....
बचपन की जो ये यादें तेरी ,
आज पिरोके रखी है ....
भूल जाए अगर तू मुझे ,
तो ये यादें संजोके रखी है ....
तो ये यादें संजोके रखी है ....
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I can so relate to it as a mom..you have penned it so beautifully Saumy and nice painting :)
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DeleteSome of the best childhood memories are anchored by the time spent with brothers, sisters, mom, dad and the family. These are the simple times that are swept away when life’s tide brings responsibilities aplenty.
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DeleteSimply simple words yet beautifully touching poem just loved it !!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Ruchi! Glad you liked it :)
DeleteWonderful touching lines Saumy, and such a beautiful painting!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Tina! :)
DeleteI loved my childhood and loved your poem too :) beautiful indeed!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Shweta! Glad the poem took you to your childhood days. :)
Deleteoh it so much seems like me holding my child the first time..very nicely written saumy..nostalgic..
ReplyDeleteI could keep this poem for my kids too...so beautiful...!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Saumy.. the pic chosen by you itself says so much...keep it up
ReplyDeleteSo very beautiful and innocent!
ReplyDeleteIt's beautiful Saumya .It's so touching.
ReplyDeleteIt was so blissfull..
ReplyDeletecould relate to each and every line.
This is a beautiful composition dear Saumy, loved both the expression as well as the painting :) Keep it up!!
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