There comes a time in everyone's life when a person feels sad before leaving his/her home. Separation is something that plays a hard part when you live far from home and visit on certain occasions, that too for short periods. I always feel that whether parents shows their emotions or not as they miss their children immensely when they live far from them.
So here's a poem, I'm sharing with you all! The first two stanzas depicts the sad emotion and the last stanza depicts the joy (like a happy ending)!
आज फिर एक बार बिरहा की घड़ी आयी ...
अपनों से दूर जाने की जो खबर ये लायी ,
आज फिर एक बार बिरहा की घड़ी आयी ...
वक़्त के पन्ने कब पलटते गए ,
न खबर हमको कभी लग पायी ,
आज फिर एक बार बिरहा की घड़ी आयी ...
ये जो गहरे रिश्तों को कभी न भूल पायी ,
आज फिर एक बार बिरहा की घड़ी आयी ...
घर की रौनक को छोड़ चले जा रहे हैं हम सब ,
माता-पिता से दूरिया जो बढ़ा रहे हैं हम सब ,
ये बात किसी को न समझ आयी ,
आज फिर एक बार बिरहा की घड़ी आयी ...
वो जो ममता के एहसास को भुलाते जा रहे हैं ,
वो जो अपनों के गमो को हम समझ न पा रहे हैं ,
ये खेल की बिसात में ,
जो जीवन की बाज़ी लगायी ,
आज फिर एक बार बिरहा की घड़ी आयी ....
दिल की बात जो आज समझ आयी ,
अंधेरे में एक लौ जो तुमने जलायी ,
खुशी है की रात सुहानी आज नज़र आयी ,
आज फिर एक बार बिरहा की घड़ी आयी ...
नये किस्से जो ये साथ में लायी ,
नये वादे ये जो संग कर आयी ,
बिरहा होने का दर्द ये छोड़ आयी ,
आज फिर एक बार खुशी की लहर सी छायी ...
आज फिर एक बार खुशी की लहर सी छायी ...
This was so beautiful Saumy! I was teary eyed thinking about parting from my kids as they will grow up eventually! Very eloquently written....direct dil se, I am guessing!
ReplyDeleteYeah direct dil se! ;) Thanks for this wonderful feedback, Kala! Glad you liked it :)
DeleteHindi Poetry rhyming of yours needs a little more attention.
ReplyDeleteThis one is a nicely written subtle poetry. Thanks for sharing.
Have a look on my Hindi Poetry Blog
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Thanks for your feedback, Sir! Am still learning and gaining from pro writers. :)
DeleteSaumy.. this is really a super awesome KAVITA .... looking like the professional one, I am really impressed, along with twitter, I will share this with my family members too :)
ReplyDeleteAh.. You made my day, Anshul! Thank you so very much :)
DeleteThis one is really nice..you are good with hindi poems too..I can completely relate to it..seperation is the most difficult!
ReplyDeleteIt's indeed difficult! Glad you liked the poem, Deepa. :)
DeleteVery touching Saumy. I don't know Hindi much and so, I thought I won't read it. But when you mentioned that it was simple, I decided to give it a try. I am glad I did. It is indeed touching :) Write more poems like these
ReplyDeleteGlad you read it, Ranjini! Thanks for such a wonderful feedback :)
DeleteThis is such a heart touching and beautiful poem,Saumy. It reminds me of my days I was away from my parents, where I thought it wasn't a big deal but went teary-eyed every time.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by and reading the post, Ramya!:) The feelings are mutual here!
DeleteVery well written!!! Keep it up .. Poems are d bedt way if expression!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by and reading the post, Ruchi! Glad you liked the poem :)
DeleteVery touching Saumy. Poet in the making
ReplyDeleteHehehe..I'm no poet! Just random thoughts here and there :P
DeleteGlad you liked the poem! :D :D
Beautifully written and after a long time did I get a chance to read a hindi poem. Well done and I look forward to read more.
ReplyDeleteWow! Thanks a lot! Glad you liked the poem! :)
DeleteReminds me of the time I went out of my home for engineering. And, never returned back for good!
ReplyDeleteGreat work, buddy.
Thanks a lot, Alok! Glad you liked the poem. :)
DeleteTouching lines!Superb poetry!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Subha! :)
DeleteNaustalgic Saumy! When I went to college leaving home, it was really tough, but tougher was the time when I had to leave after marriage. very nice poem, you should write more of these, loving the style.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Menaka! Glad the essence of the poem could reach your heart. :)
DeleteVery nice.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! :)
DeleteA very heart touching poem, Saumy. Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Purba! Glad you liked it :)
DeleteUnbelievably tender and nostalgic. Amazing composition.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Anupam! Glad you liked it :)
DeleteThank you so much! :)
ReplyDeleteati sundar, iski lay kamal ki hai
ReplyDeleteDhanyawaad! :)
DeleteHeartfelt and beautifully touching, truly strikes a chord!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot,Arti! Glad you liked it :)
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